Tumor, You really should use the skills You have more widely as well as a writer (the plot is NOT predictable as usual) and a CG designer! I´ve introdused Your work to my colleagues at our computer graphics division, and they agreed with me, that it is a waste of talent to just make such an excellent work for only internet.
P.S And by all said above, I did not by all means have in mind, that THIS FORUM, that I´ve been a member for almost 5 years, is "Just another page on the internet"...It actually is my virtual home number 1.
Great work tumor, but after reading the part where it says that the grandma had eyes only for her niece, I can only wonder as to how that will end..............
P.S.
The expressions on their faces are priceless.
Every one and there mum's are packing guns around here.